Abandoned Ship
What words can I say
secrets behind the rust
fragile temptation
to reach for the ocean
When the sun goes down
only ghosts will appear
and stories of navigators
will fly in the evening
What sand can bring you
to a coast of healing
skelletons of steel
flashbacks of waves waste
When the sun goes down
only you will remenber
all the joys and goodbies
forever locked inside
Abandoned
Consumed
Forgotten
Abused
By: DarkCapricorn
secrets behind the rust
fragile temptation
to reach for the ocean
When the sun goes down
only ghosts will appear
and stories of navigators
will fly in the evening
What sand can bring you
to a coast of healing
skelletons of steel
flashbacks of waves waste
When the sun goes down
only you will remenber
all the joys and goodbies
forever locked inside
Abandoned
Consumed
Forgotten
Abused
By: DarkCapricorn
posted by Daniel Lemminkäinen at 9/14/2006
3 lágrimas:
O poema está divinal e sinto-me previligiada por o ter lido.
Gostei de essecialmente da última quadra,onde reduzes o número de vocábulos e os substituis por maravilhosos silêncios.
Continua.:)
fabulosos poemas man!
e ainda existe kem n acredite k vivemos d palavras!!
só espero k n t afundes na mágoa desses últimos sentimentos..
era uma perda impossivel d suportar
abraços
Os últimos sentimentos servem para te fortalecer e tornar-te numa pessoa "melhor"...
Dark kiss
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